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Тема в разделе Учеба создана пользователем Logiqq 21 янв 2022. 84 просмотра

  1. Logiqq
    Logiqq Автор темы 21 янв 2022 Заблокирован(а) 15 9 дек 2020
    Проверьте ошибки есть? спасибо заранее
    We present you the high-tec bench, a technologically advanced bench.
    The most important part of the bench where you sit, is made of plastic like the back of the bench.
    This bench is equipped with a umbrella with integrated lighting, the lights are automatically activated at 6 pm and deactivated at 7 am by default.
    These lights are also controllable with an application that can be installed on a cell phone, the application can control the color of the light and its activation time.
    To recharge the lights you just need to plug the umbrella into a electrical plug, for the umbrella it's made of canvas and protects very well from rain.
     
  2. LVV
    high-tecH
    мне кажется стоит переделать саму структуру: we are going to present you our invention. So, it's high-tech bench, actually technologically advanced bench (technologically звучит страно в предложении, нужно услышать мысль, чтобы подобрать нужное слово).
    Далее: The bench consist of part, where u sit (и дополнить надо из чего состоит). Mainly, it sitting part made of plastic as well as back part of bench, where u can lean. (или просто benchs made of plastic.). Вместо activate я бы использовал turn on and turn off.

    These light could be controlled using special application, that u install on your mobile phone (cell phone редкость услышать и надо использовать passive voice). Остальное нормально.
     
    1. Logiqq Автор темы
      LVV, окей, спасибо
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